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Aug 18, 2012, 5:59:20 AM
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Sunrise by malaladanila Sunrise by malaladanila
I dedicate this picture to Victor:iconvictor23081981:
La multi ani! :cake:

Giurgiu, 18 August 2012
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Whilst a beautiful shot, I feel the vision just wasn't quite there as it's a fairly standard concept and execution- hence the originality score too.

That may seem harsh, but I just mean it would have been more exciting and visually stunning to have attempted this from a different angle. The negative space is nice (and by that I mean the silhouette of the horizon) but there's not enough of it for it to make an impact. I personally would have liked to have seen this in thirds, so a third of the space being the silhouette, then the middle portion the sun (rise?)
and finally the top portion fading to the blue.

I've given you a high technique score because I feel it deserves it, still not quite a 5 but very close. You captured the colours beautifully and the image is nice and crisp.

Unfortunately it didn't make a massive impact on me, which is a shame because all the potential was there. I've seen this style of shot done a thousand times and a few of them have made me literally gasp.

I really like what you have done in this shot and I've done my best to give you a fair critique.
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XOrdinary1998 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!! :love:
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:iconmalaladanila:
malaladanila Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Thank you so much, Noah!
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:iconxordinary1998:
XOrdinary1998 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, how do you know my name? Did you look at my profile or something? :D
You are very welcome!
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:iconmalaladanila:
malaladanila Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Yes, I see in your profile. :)
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:iconxordinary1998:
XOrdinary1998 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, phew, thought you were someone I met before and forgot... :XD:
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Stroody Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Exquisite !
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malaladanila Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Thank you!
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W444GH Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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victor23081981 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Iti multumesc mult! :)
(cu foarte mare intarzaiere:))
Este un rasarit superb! :)
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malaladanila Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Cu mult drag! Ma bucur ca-ti place!
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