Whilst a beautiful shot, I feel the vision just wasn't quite there as it's a fairly standard concept and execution- hence the originality score too.
That may seem harsh, but I just mean it would have been more exciting and visually stunning to have attempted this from a different angle. The negative space is nice (and by that I mean the silhouette of the horizon) but there's not enough of it for it to make an impact. I personally would have liked to have seen this in thirds, so a third of the space being the silhouette, then the middle portion the sun (rise?) and finally the top portion fading to the blue.
I've given you a high technique score because I feel it deserves it, still not quite a 5 but very close. You captured the colours beautifully and the image is nice and crisp.
Unfortunately it didn't make a massive impact on me, which is a shame because all the potential was there. I've seen this style of shot done a thousand times and a few of them have made me literally gasp.
I really like what you have done in this shot and I've done my best to give you a fair critique.
That may seem harsh, but I just mean it would have been more exciting and visually stunning to have attempted this from a different angle. The negative space is nice (and by that I mean the silhouette of the horizon) but there's not enough of it for it to make an impact. I personally would have liked to have seen this in thirds, so a third of the space being the silhouette, then the middle portion the sun (rise?)
and finally the top portion fading to the blue.
I've given you a high technique score because I feel it deserves it, still not quite a 5 but very close. You captured the colours beautifully and the image is nice and crisp.
Unfortunately it didn't make a massive impact on me, which is a shame because all the potential was there. I've seen this style of shot done a thousand times and a few of them have made me literally gasp.
I really like what you have done in this shot and I've done my best to give you a fair critique.
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