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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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That may seem harsh, but I just mean it would have been more exciting and visually stunning to have attempted this from a different angle. The negative space is nice (and by that I mean the silhouette of the horizon) but there's not enough of it for it to make an impact. I personally would have liked to have seen this in thirds, so a third of the space being the silhouette, then the middle portion the sun (rise?)
and finally the top portion fading to the blue.
I've given you a high technique score because I feel it deserves it, still not quite a 5 but very close. You captured the colours beautifully and the image is nice and crisp.
Unfortunately it didn't make a massive impact on me, which is a shame because all the potential was there. I've seen this style of shot done a thousand times and a few of them have made me literally gasp.
I really like what you have done in this shot and I've done my best to give you a fair critique.
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